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原帖由 新しいポリス 于 2008-4-27 17:28 发表
接18楼：
One day Susy was found dead in a abandoned hut,naked.

不定冠词又错嘞
是an abandoned

接39楼
After  he bited dashu,morse stand up, shout to the crowd: I'm the king of this F**K world

Suddenly , morse take susy under his arm, and climb up to the top of empire tower.....

[ 本帖最后由 shuangshuang 于 2008-4-28 20:54 编辑 ]

接40楼：
On  MORSE 's arrival  at the top of the tower ,the moon was smiling ,shining so brightly.
In the  pale moon light ,MORSE burst into tears.

[ 本帖最后由 熠熠生辉 于 2008-4-28 21:01 编辑 ]

接43（早晓得我应该一口气给说完)
He loved Susy so deeply but nobody tust his true love.MORSE came to a dilemma:jump or live without Susy?

接43
But The angry people would not  let him go, they must rescue their queen from his hand, they send the pilots to beat him.....

接44楼（原来大家都想MORSE死掉的啊？）
The helicopters suddenly came to the top tower and fired to MORSE.However,he still hold Susy's body firmly and heaved the body up ,shouted:If you keep on fire,I'll jump with Susy  ,and what you all get will be two shattered body!

插个楼说下，我还想让个变个圆满的结局的呢。结果看来大家的意见都是一致的
要我们的MORSE消失～～
苦了被violate的susy嘞～

接46楼：
But the angried people still kept on fire .Desperated and hurted by the movement,MORSE jumped down,with Susy's cool body in his arms firmly .The good memories with Susy's one night fair flashed in MORSE's mind,but it was over.
About ten minitues later,people found two shattered body on the foot of the tower.

接48楼
"WOW~~~"sighed everybody.In the end ,the monster MORSE's love to Susy touched everyone not because MORSE  violated Susy,but because MORSE was a monster  who still had the feeling of our human beings'.

莫大在我和远远的组合下给消灭掉嘞～～