69楼语法错误，CONFIDENCE后面不是AT 而是IN，LET'S MAKE UP INTO MAN，也没有这样的表达，接69楼，that night, they talked about many things, from food to clothes, from make-up to their dreams, but what interested  them most was how to secure victory in war. they wanted to prove that they could be invincible in combat.

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Mulan bought Morse a horse the next day and they set out on the road to the war. What are waiting for them in the unknown future, the honor or the danger? They didn't know at all but they were so eager for success and they believed that they can defeat everything even the God.

LS THE的用法不对，the honor or the danger应该改为HONOR OR DANGER PLUS "they can defeat everything even the God"应该改为 THEY CAN DEFEAT ANHTHING EVEN GOD